Akasune wrote:"although you haven't been frozen, please drink a warming potion."
wait that is just as grammatically incorrect as the one you're trying to correct lol
your reword basically says "although you have NOT been frozen , please drink a warming." which would make no sense because you haven't been frozen xD
A better way of saying it would be "It would seem you've been frozen , please drink a warming potion."
❤ lolno. i put it that way because the original used although, so i thought that was what they were going for. i didnt reword it make circumstantial sense, i reworded it to make grammatical sense. :p i was still confused as to why id have to drink a potion and came up with the theory that maybe i just been in the cold too long and had to drink one to get warm so i wouldnt get -as- annoyed.

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青❤茶 » Mon Jan 16, 2012 1:09 am