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"i feel like a monster" -
whispered secrets to a plastic Jesus;
pray for swift, holy justice.
no - Fate smiles. too easy.

so you
swallow it down, let it
burn deep inside,
destroying.

i tasted the fever on your lips
and it was metallic
[gunmetal]
burning quicksilver in your veins,
dripping off your tongue.

so you
waited for it to consume you
like the monster
that it is.

"we're all monsters inside" -
broken revelations in the darkness;
the daylight was too bright
to see our sins by.

i drew the fire out with each kiss
and blew away the smoke:
guilt is like a glass hammer
beating against stone.

wow, just wow i love it your amazing! very dark and pretty, you did well. ahaha :) i can tell there is a lot of feelings behind it.

thank you :)

Thank you, Shiver. I'm glad it was effective. c:

It's very dark, but I like your style :3

It would be a good song :3 Do it!!!

I have no musical talent whatsoever
beyond singing hymns in church. o n o
If I could find someone who would put
music to the words, then I would most
definitely consider it - but I'm the
wrong person to even attempt it. ; A ;

Awwww :( I wish I could help you in that department but I can't.

It is an interesting idea, though;
I'll mention it to some friends...
They might be able to help, possibly.

That's good :3

amazing :)

Thank you.